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by gunsofchekhovia_111
Tue Oct 06, 2020 6:00 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Drain
Replies: 1
Views: 836

Re: Drain

I liked the setup, but the ending left me a little confused. Seems like kind of an "IT" thing, but I think the story would have more "punch" if the climax and resolution were more concrete and explicit. Granted, this is hard to do in 100 words, but that's why drabblers get paid t...
by gunsofchekhovia_111
Tue Oct 06, 2020 5:07 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Finally, I Got an Interview!
Replies: 3
Views: 1139

Re: Finally, I Got an Interview!

The punchline is great. I think the formatting could be improved. In particular, it would be a good bit more readable if you broke it into more than one paragraph. But overall, this is a fun one. Good work.