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I liked the setup, but the ending left me a little confused. Seems like kind of an "IT" thing, but I think the story would have more "punch" if the climax and resolution were more concrete and explicit. Granted, this is hard to do in 100 words, but that's why drabblers get paid t...
The punchline is great. I think the formatting could be improved. In particular, it would be a good bit more readable if you broke it into more than one paragraph. But overall, this is a fun one. Good work.