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by zcarter80
Fri Feb 11, 2011 4:33 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: what would you do for one?
Replies: 5
Views: 1156

Re: what would you do for one?

lol good to know that applause equates to an all you can eat buffet.
by zcarter80
Thu Feb 10, 2011 9:29 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: what would you do for one?
Replies: 5
Views: 1156

what would you do for one?

“Oh I know what I’d do.” "I would kidnap an entire preschool, slay my first born child. Hell I would slay the woman who bore my first born and call on Eldritch gods with the runes and glyphs I had etched with their blood to secure my prize.” My eyes suddenly came back into focus as I straighten...
by zcarter80
Sun Feb 06, 2011 6:02 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Bum's Rush
Replies: 5
Views: 2963

Re: Bum's Rush

freakin nice. i could actually see the exchange. i gotta hear this one read, just waiting on Rish.
by zcarter80
Sun Feb 06, 2011 5:59 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: *Trying to think of a title*
Replies: 13
Views: 2319

Re: *Trying to think of a title*

parsec or not rish i say awesome title. either that or "salt the wound".
by zcarter80
Sun Feb 06, 2011 5:57 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Lunchroom Leviathan
Replies: 4
Views: 1024

Re: Lunchroom Leviathan

your creativity must be turned all the way up man, great visuals and awesome drabble. your on a roll dude.
by zcarter80
Sun Feb 06, 2011 5:54 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Some Monsters May Tuck You In
Replies: 12
Views: 2952

Re: Some Monsters May Tuck You In

im actually surprised that of all the posts the only thing everyone seems to agree on is the quotation on real (which is "gone" now). seeing the way a few words can kind of push an audience when you see the alternative version of whats being presented kind of makes me glad i posted both. t...
by zcarter80
Sun Feb 06, 2011 5:45 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Nothing At All
Replies: 4
Views: 1302

Re: Nothing At All

hilarious!!
by zcarter80
Fri Feb 04, 2011 5:53 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: *Trying to think of a title*
Replies: 13
Views: 2319

Re: *Trying to think of a title*

those are even better.
by zcarter80
Thu Feb 03, 2011 10:19 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Ministry of Love, Grammar Bureau
Replies: 8
Views: 1388

Re: Ministry of Love, Grammar Bureau

you are kicking ass and taking names at this drabbel game my man. Excellent concepts and delivery on every one so far. cant wait to see something of yours recorded. Or rather Hear something of yours recorded. better watch my step, i dont want to be sanctioned or fined.
by zcarter80
Thu Feb 03, 2011 10:16 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: C:/dat/girl
Replies: 1
Views: 633

Re: C:/dat/girl

woah man. nicely done. and kind of dark considering it wasn't munsi writing it but brilliant in its simplicity.
by zcarter80
Thu Feb 03, 2011 10:13 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Plan B
Replies: 1
Views: 625

Re: Plan B

always have your priorities in order.
by zcarter80
Thu Feb 03, 2011 9:32 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Books
Replies: 5
Views: 827

Re: Books

can a computer properly recite klaatu barada nikto?
by zcarter80
Thu Feb 03, 2011 9:29 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Knocking can also come from within
Replies: 4
Views: 1198

Re: Knocking can also come from within

you left it just ominous enough and it was thought provoking. bravo my good man, that's some grade A drabbeling!
by zcarter80
Thu Feb 03, 2011 9:26 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: *Trying to think of a title*
Replies: 13
Views: 2319

Re: *Trying to think of a title*

nice one. it all comes full circle. i would say something like "full circle" or "hunter and prey" or something but even without a title its brilliant.
by zcarter80
Thu Feb 03, 2011 6:45 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Some Monsters May Tuck You In
Replies: 12
Views: 2952

Re: Some Monsters May Tuck You In

i wrote it so his grandpa coming in seemed like a normal occurrence, which it is and you are meant to assume is something innocent but in the end you see that even though its routine it is definitely not a wanted visit. how would you have changed it to make it clearer?
by zcarter80
Wed Feb 02, 2011 3:39 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Beckoned by My Beverage
Replies: 8
Views: 1349

Re: Beckoned by My Beverage

thanks!
by zcarter80
Tue Feb 01, 2011 6:12 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Some Monsters May Tuck You In
Replies: 12
Views: 2952

Re: Some Monsters May Tuck You In

that was what i was going for in the piece in its original draft. thanks for the feedback guys. i have a child and i know that subject matter is off putting but i would put my kid in a room full of demons for a week before i put her in a room with 1 pedophile for a half hour. so this is more "s...
by zcarter80
Tue Feb 01, 2011 5:57 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Beckoned by My Beverage
Replies: 8
Views: 1349

Re: Beckoned by My Beverage

Free drabble, the beer is free too but the curse comes with it.
by zcarter80
Mon Jan 31, 2011 11:42 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Beckoned by My Beverage
Replies: 8
Views: 1349

Re: Beckoned by My Beverage

depends on the brand but i agree.
by zcarter80
Mon Jan 31, 2011 9:33 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Beckoned by My Beverage
Replies: 8
Views: 1349

Beckoned by My Beverage

Beckoned by My Beverage Ingredients coalesce in the mixer on the counter. I hit “frappe”, encouraging the aroma from my brew to snake out onto the breeze. Moments later I pour the frothy liquid into a chalice as my neighbor Beth’s husband stands on his porch scenting the air like a hungry dog. His s...